LO4: The Games Corner Script Feedback Evidence

Today we have spoken to Vicky Kilby from Sheffield Live! who is one of the presenters from The Games Corner.  We asked her 5 questions about our script which we could then reflect upon and make amendments to our script.

The 5 questions were...

1. Do you think that our script follows the correct genre of The Games Corner? Why?

2. When researching our week, it seemed to be very slow for news - Do you think that this shows or is there enough content for a substantial news section?

3. Do you think that the dialogue is shared between you and Jordan well or is it too one sided?

4.  Does the language and form used in the script make it understandable for your target audience? Why?

5.  What would you change about our script?


Here is the evidence of our feedback meeting